prose & screenwriting support

Writing Services

Asking Lillie to review my writing has become a de facto part of my process. Her insight has undoubtedly improved my individual works but more importantly has left me with perspectives and lessons that continue to impact my growth as a writer, beyond any individual project.
— Brian Cohen, screenwriter

Coaching

3-Month Coaching: 1 Project
$260.00

After you submit the registration form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Need an extra boost of accountability and writerly guidance for your project?

Whether you’re working on a prose piece or a screenplay, this craft-focused coaching is a 3-month commitment to your work. It includes four 30-minute meetings with notes and feedback on your drafts or development documents along the way. Feedback is in the form of margin notes and verbal discussion.

Each coaching schedule is tailored to the writer. This is an example of what that could look like:

Week 1: Kick-off Meeting

At our first meeting, you’ll tell me about your project and what your goals are for our coaching. Together, we’ll come up with a schedule of deadlines and meetings that fits your needs.

Week 3: Deadline

Work to review at our second meeting is due to me one week before.

Week 4: Second Meeting

We will review and discuss notes on submitted work and check in on how things are going.

Week 7: Deadline

Work to review at our third meeting is due to me one week before.

Week 8: Third Meeting

We will review and discuss notes on submitted work and check in on how things are going.

Week 11: Deadline

Work to review at our final meeting is due to me one week before.

Week 12: Final Meeting - You Did It!

We will review and discuss notes on submitted work, celebrate all of your amazing work, and discuss next steps!

3-Month Coaching: 2 Projects
$325.00

After you submit the registration form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Managing 2 projects at once and need an extra boost of accountability with feedback along the way?

Whether you’re working on prose pieces or screenplays (or both!), this craft-focused coaching is a 3-month commitment to your work. It includes four 30-minute meetings with notes and feedback on your drafts or development documents along the way. Feedback is in the form of margin notes and verbal discussion.

Each coaching schedule is tailored to the writer. This is an example of what that could look like:

Week 1: Kick-off Meeting

At our first meeting, you’ll tell me about your project and what your goals are for our coaching. Together, we’ll come up with a schedule of deadlines and meetings that fits your needs.

Week 3: Deadline

Work to review at our second meeting is due to me one week before.

Week 4: Second Meeting

We will review and discuss notes on submitted work and check in on how things are going.

Week 7: Deadline

Work to review at our third meeting is due to me one week before.

Week 8: Third Meeting

We will review and discuss notes on submitted work and check in on how things are going.

Week 11: Deadline

Work to review at our final meeting is due to me one week before.

Week 12: Final Meeting - You Did It!

We will review and discuss notes on submitted work, celebrate all of your amazing work, and discuss next steps!

3-Month Coaching: 3 Projects
$390.00

After you submit the registration form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Managing 3 projects at once and need an extra boost of accountability with feedback along the way?

Whether you’re working on prose pieces or screenplays (or both!), this craft-focused coaching is a 3-month commitment to your work. It includes four 30-minute meetings with notes and feedback on your drafts or development documents along the way. Feedback is in the form of margin notes and verbal discussion.

Each coaching schedule is tailored to the writer. This is an example of what that could look like:

Week 1: Kick-off Meeting

At our first meeting, you’ll tell me about your project and what your goals are for our coaching. Together, we’ll come up with a schedule of deadlines and meetings that fits your needs.

Week 3: Deadline

Work to review at our second meeting is due to me one week before.

Week 4: Second Meeting

We will review and discuss notes on submitted work and check in on how things are going.

Week 7: Deadline

Work to review at our third meeting is due to me one week before.

Week 8: Third Meeting

We will review and discuss notes on submitted work and check in on how things are going.

Week 11: Deadline

Work to review at our final meeting is due to me one week before.

Week 12: Final Meeting - You Did It!

We will review and discuss notes on submitted work, celebrate all of your amazing work, and discuss next steps!

3-Month Coaching: 4 Projects
$460.00

After you submit the registration form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Managing 4 projects at once and need an extra boost of accountability with feedback along the way?

Whether you’re working on prose pieces or screenplays (or both!), this craft-focused coaching is a 3-month commitment to your work. It includes four 30-minute meetings with notes and feedback on your drafts or development documents along the way. Feedback is in the form of margin notes and verbal discussion.

Each coaching schedule is tailored to the writer. This is an example of what that could look like:

Week 1: Kick-off Meeting

At our first meeting, you’ll tell me about your project and what your goals are for our coaching. Together, we’ll come up with a schedule of deadlines and meetings that fits your needs.

Week 3: Deadline

Work to review at our second meeting is due to me one week before.

Week 4: Second Meeting

We will review and discuss notes on submitted work and check in on how things are going.

Week 7: Deadline

Work to review at our third meeting is due to me one week before.

Week 8: Third Meeting

We will review and discuss notes on submitted work and check in on how things are going.

Week 11: Deadline

Work to review at our final meeting is due to me one week before.

Week 12: Final Meeting - You Did It!

We will review and discuss notes on submitted work, celebrate all of your amazing work, and discuss next steps!

3-Month Coaching: 5 Projects
$525.00

After you submit the registration form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Managing 5 projects at once and need an extra boost of accountability with feedback along the way?

Whether you’re working on prose pieces or screenplays (or both!), this craft-focused coaching is a 3-month commitment to your work. It includes four 30-minute meetings with notes and feedback on your drafts or development documents along the way. Feedback is in the form of margin notes and verbal discussion.

Each coaching schedule is tailored to the writer. This is an example of what that could look like:

Week 1: Kick-off Meeting

At our first meeting, you’ll tell me about your project and what your goals are for our coaching. Together, we’ll come up with a schedule of deadlines and meetings that fits your needs.

Week 3: Deadline

Work to review at our second meeting is due to me one week before.

Week 4: Second Meeting

We will review and discuss notes on submitted work and check in on how things are going.

Week 7: Deadline

Work to review at our third meeting is due to me one week before.

Week 8: Third Meeting

We will review and discuss notes on submitted work and check in on how things are going.

Week 11: Deadline

Work to review at our final meeting is due to me one week before.

Week 12: Final Meeting - You Did It!

We will review and discuss notes on submitted work, celebrate all of your amazing work, and discuss next steps!


Notes

Feature Screenplay – Notes
$135.00

After you complete the submission form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Up to 130 pages.

Includes:

  • margin comments on the script

  • a 5-7 page feedback document addressing strengths, opportunities for improvement, and ideas for the next revision

  • typically 7-10 day turnaround

Feature Screenplay – Notes with Zoom Follow-up
$170.00

After you complete the submission form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Up to 130 pages.

Includes:

  • margin comments on the script

  • a 5-7 page feedback document addressing strengths, opportunities for improvement, and potential ideas for the next revision

  • typically 7-10 day turnaround

  • a follow-up Zoom call to discuss notes and ideas

Pilot Screenplay – Notes
$100.00

After you complete the submission form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Up to 65 pages.

Includes:

  • margin comments on the script

  • a 5-7 page feedback document addressing strengths, opportunities for improvement, and potential ideas for the next revision

  • typically 7-10 day turnaround

Pilot Screenplay – Notes with Zoom Follow-up
$135.00

After you complete the submission form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Up to 65 pages.

Includes:

  • margin comments on the script

  • a 5-7 page feedback document addressing strengths, opportunities for improvement, and potential ideas for the next revision

  • typically 7-10 day turnaround

  • a follow-up Zoom call to discuss notes and ideas

Short Film Screenplay – Notes
$60.00

After you complete the submission form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Up to 25 pages.

Includes:

  • margin comments on the script

  • a 3-5 page feedback document addressing strengths, opportunities for improvement, and potential ideas for the next revision

  • typically 7-10 day turnaround

Short Film Screenplay – Notes with Zoom Follow-up
$95.00

After you complete the submission form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Up to 25 pages.

Includes:

  • margin comments on the script

  • a 3-5 page feedback document addressing strengths, opportunities for improvement, and potential ideas for the next revision

  • typically 7-10 day turnaround

  • a follow-up Zoom call to discuss notes and ideas

Pitch Deck or Pitch Script – Notes
$50.00

After you complete the submission form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Up to 20 pages of a deck or up to 5 pages of a verbal pitch script.

Includes:

  • margin comments on the deck or script

  • a 3-5 page feedback document addressing strengths, opportunities for improvement, and potential ideas for the next revision

  • typically 5-day turnaround

Pitch Deck or Pitch Script – Notes with Zoom Follow-up
$85.00

After you complete the submission form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Up to 20 pages of a deck or up to 5 pages of a verbal pitch script.

Includes:

  • margin comments on the deck or script

  • a 3-5 page feedback document addressing strengths, opportunities for improvement, and potential ideas for the next revision

  • typically 5-day turnaround

  • a follow-up Zoom call to discuss notes and ideas

Pilot Screenplay – Line Editing
$70.00

After you complete the submission form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Up to 65 pages.

Includes:

  • Line-by-line suggested edits to sharpen a draft, including through more concise language, fixing typos, and flagging opportunities for trimming, cutting, or clarifying

  • typically 5-7 day turnaround

Feature Screenplay – Line Editing
$100.00

After you complete the submission form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Up to 120 pages.

Includes:

  • Line-by-line suggested edits to sharpen a draft, including through more concise language, fixing typos, and flagging opportunities for trimming, cutting, or clarifying

  • typically 5-7 day turnaround

Synopsis or Outline of Prose or Screenplay – Notes
$70.00

After you complete the submission form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Up to 30 pages.

Includes:

  • margin comments on the draft

  • a 3-5 page feedback document addressing strengths, opportunities for improvement, and potential ideas for the next revision

  • typically 7-10 day turnaround

Synopsis or Outline of Prose or Screenplay – Notes with Zoom Follow-up
$105.00

After you complete the submission form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Up to 30 pages.

Includes:

  • margin comments on the draft

  • a 3-5 page feedback document addressing strengths, opportunities for improvement, and potential ideas for the next revision

  • typically 7-10 day turnaround

  • a follow-up Zoom call to discuss notes and ideas

Short Story, Personal Essay or Chapter – Notes
$65.00

After you complete the submission form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Up to 40 pages, double-spaced.

Includes:

  • margin comments on the draft

  • a 3-5 page feedback document addressing strengths, opportunities for improvement, and potential ideas for the next revision

  • typically 7-10 day turnaround

Short Story, Personal Essay or Chapter – Notes with Zoom Follow-up
$100.00

After you complete the submission form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Up to 40 pages, double-spaced.

Includes:

  • margin comments on the draft

  • a 3-5 page feedback document addressing strengths, opportunities for improvement, and potential ideas for the next revision

  • typically 7-10 day turnaround

  • a follow-up Zoom call to discuss notes and ideas

Novel or Memoir – Notes
$325.00

After you complete the submission form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Includes:

  • margin comments on the manuscript

  • a 5-7 page feedback document addressing strengths, opportunities for improvement, and potential ideas for the next revision

  • typically 1-month turnaround

Novel or Memoir – Notes with Zoom Follow-up
$360.00

After you complete the submission form, be sure to go to your cart to finish checking out!

Includes:

  • margin comments on the manuscript

  • a 5-7 page feedback document addressing strengths, opportunities for improvement, and potential ideas for the next revision

  • typically 1-month turnaround

  • a follow-up Zoom call to discuss notes and ideas


As an agented novelist, I was happy to have Lillie’s assistance editing my novel. She read it carefully and gave me comments from the minuscule to the paradigmatic. She has a good sense of how to keep a story moving and how to make dialogue work well.
— Michelle Lerner, novelist

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